Premise & Hook Builder Workbook (Creative Writing Resource PDF)

Stop Rambling. Start Hooking.

Your book deserves more than a summary. Agents and readers want a reason to care. This workbook shows you how to nail your premise, sharpen your hook, and pitch with confidence.

👉 Ever been asked, “What’s your book about?” and felt your stomach drop?

👉 You ramble. You second-guess. You sound more confused than convincing.

👉 The person asking? Glazes over.

It’s not because your story isn’t good.

It’s because your pitch isn’t.

The Premise & Hook Builder Workbook walks you step-by-step through creating a premise that actually sells your story—and a hook that gets agents leaning forward instead of checking their phones.
 

Inside you’ll find:
 

• The exact 3-part framework acquisitions editors use to test a premise.

• Real, genre-specific examples (no vague “insert story here” fluff).

• A full worked-through example so you can see the difference between summary and hook.

• Plug-and-play exercises that take you from “Um…” to “Here’s the book you need to read.”

I built this workbook from years inside a Big 5 publishing house. I know what gets stories rejected—and what makes agents fight for them.

Ready to stop losing people when you talk about your book?

Grab the workbook now and give your story the hook it deserves.

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