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EDITING
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Professional fiction editing services for writers at every level and every stage of the publishing process.
Work with an experienced editor trusted by bestselling and award-winning authors to strengthen your story, clarify your vision, and reach a polished final draft.
How it works:
Month One
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Coaching Call #1: 1-hr introduction and roadblock call, where we’ll discuss your overall goals for this novel and what problems you've been running into.
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Editorial assessment: (as detailed above) to identify what’s working and what's not, as well as suggestions for how to strengthen and revise future drafts of your novel.
Months Two & Three
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Coaching Call #2: 1-hr video call to discuss the feedback, ask questions, and make a game plan for approaching revisions.
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Revision Period: With a clear blueprint established together based on my previous feedback, you’ll dive into revisions feeling confident and energized by your story. I’ll be available via email for ongoing support during this process, so you won’t have to go it alone. Timeline for the revision period can be customized based on your needs.
Month Four
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Developmental Edit: Once your revised draft is ready, I’ll complete a full developmental edit (as detailed above). I’ll also include a detailed Beat Sheet to track all the key story events and ensure you’re hitting all the right beats at all the right moments to keep readers invested.
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Coaching Call #3: We’ll finish up with a 1-hr video call once you've had a chance to read and digest my notes, where we can go through any final questions or concerns you have about your manuscript, and trouble-shoot any last issues together.
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Need help structuring the bones of your story? We’ll go through your chapter-by-chapter outline, pinpointing which areas shine or need rethinking, themes to develop, and questions to answer. I’ll give you customized feedback to get you pointed in the right direction, including a Beat Sheet to evaluate pacing/tension. Then we’ll set checkpoints to help you achieve your writing goals and ensure you’ve created a robust and perfectly mapped out outline for your idea.
Services Include:
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A comprehensive edit on the long outline of your novel outline (usually in the form of a chapter-by-chapter breakdown describing your plot and character development. Maximum 20 double-spaced pages/~5k words).
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You’ll receive comments in the margins on each and every chapter that will highlight areas to work on, themes to nurture, and sections that have or lack potential. I’ll also include a Beat Sheet that maps your current plot, allowing us to identify where your story is hitting or missing the essential twists and turning point, climactic moments, and phases of your characters’ arc that are necessary for captivating and keeping readers’ attention, making sure you’re pushing each scene to its maximum potential.
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A follow-up 1-hr video call to review the outline and suggestions together, and you’ll be able to ask any questions, brainstorm ideas, and plan out you next steps with professional guidance.
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Outline length and rounds of edits are adjustable for an additional fee.
NOVEL INTENSIVE
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The most comprehensive package I offer, and only available to a select few clients each year, this service is built to enhance your manuscript to its full potential. With this multi-stage, hands-on editorial package, we’ll expertly amplify your writing while shaping your story into the novel you’ve always dreamed of.
NOVEL INTENSIVE
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DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING
My developmental edit digs deep into the meat of your story and narrative, helping shape your manuscript into a tightly paced, high-tension, and well-structured novel. I’ll provide thorough feedback and guidance in the shaping of your story, leaving you with a clear idea of what heavy lifting needs to be done.
If you’re looking for a manuscript critique that provides a top-level review of your novel, this is the package for you. This assessment delivers a solid amount of actionable feedback, giving you a strong starting point to tackle revisions.
Services include:
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A detailed editorial report (usually 5+ pages) that provides broad-strokes feedback on every element of your story. I'll identify what’s working and what's not, as well as suggestions for how to strengthen and revise future drafts of your novel.
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I’ll provide my recommendations on how to position your novel in the market based on my years of industry experience.
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A follow-up 1-hr video call to address any questions about the assessment.
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Services include:
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We'll start with a 1-hr deep-dive call, where you'll fill me in on where you are in the drafting process, what roadblocks you've been running into, what goals you have for your story, and the central areas of focus needed for your edit.
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An in-depth editorial letter (usually 10+ pages) addressing all high-level elements such as: overall story and writing, plot and pacing, character development and motivation, world building, structural issues, narrative point of view, etc.
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Comments (using tracked changes) throughout the margins of your manuscript, including my reactions as I read the manuscript, as well as any questions or notes for you to consider. I'll use flags to pinpoint specific areas in the ms that demonstrate the issues raised in the letter so that it's easy to identify exactly where these issues crop up and include suggestions for how to resolve them.
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A follow-up 1-hr video call once you've had a chance to read and digest my notes, where we can go through any final questions or concerns you have about your ms, and trouble-shoot any last issues together.
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My developmental edit digs deep into the meat of your story and narrative, helping shape your manuscript into a tightly paced, high-tension, and well-structured novel. I’ll provide thorough feedback and guidance in the shaping of your story, leaving you with a clear idea of what heavy lifting needs to be done.
Services include:
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An in-depth editorial letter (usually 10+ pages) addressing all high-level elements such as: overall story and writing, plot and pacing, character development and motivation, world building, structural issues, narrative point of view, etc.
-
Comments (using tracked changes) throughout the margins of your manuscript, including my reactions as I read the manuscript, as well as any questions or notes for you to consider. I'll use flags to pinpoint specific areas in the MS that demonstrate the issues raised in the letter so that it's easy to identify exactly where these issues crop up and include suggestions for how to resolve them.
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A follow-up 1-hr video call once you've had a chance to read and digest my notes, where we can go through any final questions or concerns you have about your MS, and trouble-shoot any last issues together.
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Services include:
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A detailed editorial report (usually 5+ pages) that provides broad-strokes feedback on every element of your story. I'll identify what’s working and what's not, as well as suggestions for how to strengthen and revise future drafts of your novel.
-
I’ll provide my recommendations on how to position your novel in the market based on my years of industry experience.
-
A follow-up 1-hr video call to address any questions about the assessment.
-
If you’re looking for a manuscript critique that provides a top-level review of your novel, this is the package for you. This assessment delivers a solid amount of actionable feedback, giving you a strong starting point to tackle revisions.
EDITORIAL ASSESSMENT
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The most comprehensive package I offer, and only available to a select few clients each year, this service is built to enhance your manuscript to its full potential. With this multi-stage, hands-on editorial package, we’ll expertly amplify your writing while shaping your story into the novel you’ve always dreamed of.
How it works:
Month One
-
Coaching Call #1: 1-hr introduction and roadblock call, where we’ll discuss your overall goals for this novel and what problems you've been running into.
-
Editorial assessment: (as detailed above) to identify what’s working and what's not, as well as suggestions for how to strengthen and revise future drafts of your novel.
Months Two & Three
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Coaching Call #2: 1-hr video call to discuss the feedback, ask questions, and make a game plan for approaching revisions.
-
Revision Period: With a clear blueprint established together based on my previous feedback, you’ll dive into revisions feeling confident and energized by your story. I’ll be available via email for ongoing support during this process, so you won’t have to go it alone. Timeline for the revision period can be customized based on your needs.
Month Four
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Developmental Edit: Once your revised draft is ready, I’ll complete a full developmental edit (as detailed above). I’ll also include a detailed Beat Sheet to track all the key story events and ensure you’re hitting all the right beats at all the right moments to keep readers invested.
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Coaching Call #3: We’ll finish up with a 1-hr video call once you've had a chance to read and digest my notes, where we can go through any final questions or concerns you have about your manuscript, and trouble-shoot any last issues together.
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OUTLINE OVERHAUL
Need help structuring the bones of your story? We’ll go through your chapter-by-chapter outline, pinpointing which areas shine or need rethinking, themes to develop, and questions to answer. I’ll give you customized feedback to get you pointed in the right direction, including a Beat Sheet to evaluate pacing/tension. Then we’ll set checkpoints to help you achieve your writing goals.
Services Include:
-
A comprehensive edit on the long outline of your novel outline (usually in the form of a chapter-by-chapter breakdown describing your plot and character development. Maximum 20 double-spaced pages/~5k words).
-
You’ll receive comments in the margins on each and every chapter that will highlight areas to work on, themes to nurture, and sections that have or lack potential. I’ll also include a Beat Sheet that maps your current plot, allowing us to identify where your story is hitting or missing the essential twists and turning point, climactic moments, and phases of your characters’ arc that are necessary for captivating and keeping readers’ attention, making sure you’re pushing each scene to its maximum potential.
-
A follow-up 1-hr video call to review the outline and suggestions together, and you’ll be able to ask any questions, brainstorm ideas, and plan out you next steps with professional guidance.
-
Outline length and rounds of edits are adjustable for an additional fee.
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Whether you need a query letter edit or complete package to go out on submission, I'll give careful analysis and actionable feedback to ensure you stand out in the inbox of your dream agents.
Query Letter Evaluation
A query letter is such a critical piece of going on submission. Having worked in the industry for over a decade, I can help ensure you hit all the elements that literary agents will be looking for.
Services include:
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Two passes of your query/cover letter, including in-depth edits on formatting, clarity, and content.
We’ll work together to ensure your pitch is as compelling as possible so that it stands out in the dreaded “slush pile.”
Premium Submission-Ready Package
This package builds on a simple query letter edit by helping you create the perfect complete package to go out on submission.
I’ll give careful analysis and actionable feedback to ensure your character and plot premise are introduced to readers in an impactful manner, working to develop the “hook” of your submission so agents are eager to request more.
Services include:
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Full edit of your query letter – As detailed above.
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Full edit of the first chapter of your novel (up to 5k words) – The opening pages are crucial to hooking an agent’s interest. I’ll ensure those pages are strong and engaging, so that agents are eager to read more. (1 round, which includes a line edit, actionable advice and feedback on your writing, as well as any thoughts, questions, or concerns that occur to me as I'm reading the opening of your story, so you have a clear idea of what agents might be thinking.)
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Full edit of your short synopsis (up to 1k words) – Trying to distill an entire novel into a page or two can be excruciating, but I’m here to help! We’ll work to make your story shine, highlighting all its best elements in a concise and effective 1–2-page synopsis. (1 round of editing.)
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A follow-up 30 min call after my edits are complete, where we can go through any final questions you have about this material.
With this package, you’ll walk away with a massive amount of valuable feedback and the confidence needed to make your novel stand out. I’d be happy to help you put together a carefully curated and polished package, ready to hit the inboxes of your dream agents!
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Query Letter Evaluation
A query letter is such a critical piece of going on submission. Having worked in the industry for over a decade, I can help ensure you hit all the elements that literary agents will be looking for.
Services include:
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Two passes of your query/cover letter, including in-depth edits on formatting, clarity, and content.
We’ll work together to ensure your pitch is as compelling as possible so that it stands out in the dreaded “slush pile.”Premium Submission-Ready Package
This package builds on a simple query letter edit by helping you create the perfect complete package to go out on submission. I’ll give careful analysis and actionable feedback to ensure your character and plot premise are introduced to readers in an impactful manner, working to develop the “hook” of your submission so agents are eager to request more.
Services include:
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Full edit of your query letter – As detailed above.
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Full edit of the first chapter of your novel (up to 5k words). The opening pages are crucial to hooking an agent’s interest. I’ll ensure those pages are strong and engaging, so that agents are eager to read more. (1 round, which includes a line edit, actionable advice and feedback on your writing, as well as any thoughts/questions/concerns that occur to me as I'm reading the opening of your story, so you have a clear idea of what agents might be thinking.)
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Full edit of your short synopsis (up to 1k words). Trying to distill an entire novel into a page or two can be excruciating, but I’m here to help! We’ll work to make your story shine, highlighting all its best elements in a concise and effective 1–2-page synopsis. (1 round of editing.)
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A follow-up 30 min call after my edits are complete, where we can go through any final questions you have about this material.
With this package, you’ll walk away with a massive amount of valuable feedback and the confidence needed to make your novel stand out. I’d be happy to help you put together a carefully curated and polished package, ready to hit the inboxes of your dream agents!
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Whether you need a query letter edit or complete package to go out on submission, I'll give careful analysis and actionable feedback to ensure you stand out in the inbox of your dream agents.
SUBMISSION-READY SERVICES
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